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"..I pen these TRITE attempts..."—not TRIED. That's how I hear it anyway. | "..I pen these TRITE attempts..."—not TRIED. That's how I hear it anyway. | ||
I thought it was "trite" as well, but the [https://tallyall.club/0:/Tally%20Hall/Marvin%27s%20Marvelous%20Mechanical%20Museum/2008%20Version/Scans/Booklet%20Page%207%20%2B%208.jpeg?a=view lyric booklet] says otherwise. --[[User:StationSquare|StationSquare]] ([[User talk:StationSquare|talk]]) 09:42, 10 February 2022 (PST) | |||
"there that's sufficient, | |||
I wrote a haiku for you, | |||
Well I tried at least" | |||
these lines also follow a 5/7/5 syllable pattern but aren't labeled as a haiku on the page, is this a mistake? [[User:WillingVictim|WillingVictim]] ([[User talk:WillingVictim|talk]]) 08:07, 20 February 2024 (PST) | |||
The full line is "There, that's sufficient / I wrote a haiku for you / Well I tried at least, and that's not so bad" as the booklet for Haiku says [[User:Bun|Bun]] ([[User talk:Bun|talk]]) 10:15, 20 February 2024 (PST) | |||
Latest revision as of 18:15, 20 February 2024
"..I pen these TRITE attempts..."—not TRIED. That's how I hear it anyway.
I thought it was "trite" as well, but the lyric booklet says otherwise. --StationSquare (talk) 09:42, 10 February 2022 (PST)
"there that's sufficient, I wrote a haiku for you, Well I tried at least" these lines also follow a 5/7/5 syllable pattern but aren't labeled as a haiku on the page, is this a mistake? WillingVictim (talk) 08:07, 20 February 2024 (PST)
The full line is "There, that's sufficient / I wrote a haiku for you / Well I tried at least, and that's not so bad" as the booklet for Haiku says Bun (talk) 10:15, 20 February 2024 (PST)