Doggogamers
Made some minor changes to the demo's lyrics and also, whoever says "remember not to love me when i dissapear" doesnt say disappear fully. he says disap- and then stops for the next part.
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TallyTarts
Changed "Send my independence out to take a hike" back to "Let my independence out to take a hike". Suggestion: add a clarification that the 2005 version has "send" and that the 2008 version has "let".
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Mostly minor lyrical and grammatical errors.
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Naturalkatsup
→Joe Hawley Solo Demo Lyrics: Minor edit
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BlueYoshi 57EML
→Demo Lyrics
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Ljcool2006
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→Lyrics: demo
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→Lyrics
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Coz
Undo revision 3859 by 69.140.137.159 (talk) -- Penny is surely incorrect.
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J2
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DwightTheGreat
Created page with '===Lyrics=== <pre> The Bidding Joe Hawley I've been sleeping in a cardboard box Spending every dollar at the liquor shop And even though I know I haven't got a lot I try to give…'
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