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"..I pen these TRITE attempts..."—not TRIED. That's how I hear it anyway.
I thought it was "trite" as well, but the lyric booklet says otherwise. --StationSquare (talk) 09:42, 10 February 2022 (PST)
"there that's sufficient, I wrote a haiku for you, Well I tried at least" these lines also follow a 5/7/5 syllable pattern but aren't labeled as a haiku on the page, is this a mistake? WillingVictim (talk) 08:07, 20 February 2024 (PST)
The full line is "There, that's sufficient / I wrote a haiku for you / Well I tried at least, and that's not so bad" as the booklet for Haiku says Bun (talk) 10:15, 20 February 2024 (PST)